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three-pointed-star

pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i had a three pointed star
i thought i was special
noone told me
it was just a triangle
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    That's funny.
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    twin2 wrote:
    That's funny.

    Hmm, I've never thought of it as funny before. interesting. I can see that. I either see it as sad or as lucky, lucky that they believe they have something special, even if it is not special to others.
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    pacifier wrote:
    Hmm, I've never thought of it as funny before. interesting. I can see that. I either see it as sad or as lucky, lucky that they believe they have something special, even if it is not special to others.


    Good point. I guess everyone sees things in a different light.
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    codedbrandedlabelled wrote:
    i saw it has funny too


    I'm glad I wasn't the only one.
  • coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    So simple yet I find this poem to be brilliantly clever
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • Childrens HourChildrens Hour Posts: 93
    I guess it's pretty sad...
    You think you have something but you don't...
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I like it. Just because something is not perfect, it does not mean that it is not.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    I like it. Just because something is not perfect, it does not mean that it is not.
    :) exactly
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    pacifier wrote:
    :) exactly
    oh, btw, I borrowed this idea and put it in a recent posting. hope you dont mind.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    oh, btw, I borrowed this idea and put it in a recent posting. hope you dont mind.

    honoured :)
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