final curtain

pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
edited February 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I remember seeing a pregnant man in a hospital bed
his family by his side
A nurse came in, doctor in tow, and closed the curtain for privacy
Privacy denied
And there behind the soundproof curtain
came the words he knew already
This life inside was not his child, but himself
his own enemy
His family wept but he stayed strong
until the news continued
He could have passed this killer on
to the ones he held and raised and loved
from helpless babes to young adults
His children came to learn that day
that this too could be their fate
1 in 4, a quarter chance, 25% probability
a possibility
of becoming the next victim
fighting their father's enemy
He couldn't hold back the tears
Couldn't ask the questions ringing in his ears
filling his head
making him dizzy
wished he was dead
wished he never had to die
Then it was time for all to go
opening the curtain and leaving him exposed
And in the awkwardness of knowing what I didn't want to know
I wished I could have closed my curtain to give him his privacy
to give me mine.
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  • very nice Mz pacmomma
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    a shadow in the corner
    a young mother
    a skeleton with skin
    hiding tears from her children
    smiling for others
    trying to hold it in
    can't keep down a thing
    except emotion
    acting calm in the commotion
    pretending that she'll win
    when it's plain to see
    that the mother who mothered me
    when my curtain wasn't closed
    she's about to leave
    lose all she needs
    and everything she knows
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    oh those are good!!

    sent chillllsss down my spine.
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    thank you depop and emmi. two more poems to go to complete the set.
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    goody-o then
    that's how it'll be
    wrinkled skin
    and faded memories

    visiting hour
    a young couple arrives
    taking their place
    by the old man's side

    hello son
    you're a friendly man
    what's your name then?

    my grandson?
    I should have known
    oh, haven't you grown

    and who is this?
    and you're lady friend?
    such a pretty thing

    oh, we met last week?
    well tell me again
    goody-o then

    they said their farewells
    see you in a while
    leaving the room
    with sad eyed smiles

    and he said to the room
    to who ever would listen
    weren't they nice people
    I wished he could miss them

    Always a smile
    and goody-o then
    the curtains never closed
    around that man
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    A young girl in a hospital bed
    Three hours from home
    Just for tests

    Somehow missed the children's ward
    A touch too old?
    Or was it full?

    In her youth and relative health
    She shared a room of death
    And wealth of character

    One day out of thousands
    But never forgotten
    Lives ending, her's just begining

    The only one left with their curtain still open
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    nice thread
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    Thanks deadnote. That's it for now. completed.
  • DinghyDogDinghyDog Posts: 587
    edited October 2012
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    Post edited by DinghyDog on
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    man
    that first one is mind-blowing
    they are all good
    but damn
    that first one . . .
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
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