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tell me what you see

pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
look into my eyes
and tell me what you see
i want to know
who i am

do you have the answers
that i need
do you have the means
to an end

i've made a quest
to give me meaning
asking questions
never solved

chasing shadows
non-existant
create distraction
from my soul

all that's left
goes unkown
who i am
who i'll be

look into my eyes
and tell me what i need
i want to know
what you see
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  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    nice one. :) really good.

    can't count all the times I've asked that..
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    I like it. Shows confusion nicely. I am sure we have all felt like that at one time or another. The good thing is it shows you are taking inventory inside, you have to do that sometimes.
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    twin1 wrote:
    I like it. Shows confusion nicely. I am sure we have all felt like that at one time or another. The good thing is it shows you are taking inventory inside, you have to do that sometimes.


    I agree with you sis.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I see someone who is wondering, but I don't know quite what you're wondering about. :D
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I can tell without looking. Satisfied, successful...you are who you make you.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    I can tell without looking. Satisfied, successful...you are who you make you.

    that depends how you define successful
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    pacifier wrote:
    that depends how you define successful

    So true. You don't even know how wellI understand that.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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