who am I?

pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
I'm young, I'm getting old. A quarter of a century. Is that who I am?
I am a mother, nearly (or am I now?) Is that who I am?
I'll be a wife soon (I am already). Is that who I am?
A sister, a daughter, an aunty to unknown relatives and unrelated people. Is that who I am?
I'm kind and I'm cranky, confident and insecure, loving and understanding (though I rarely understand). Is that who I am?
I am white, I'm Australian (bad combination, I burn so easily). Is that who I am?
I'm unemployed, but not worthless, don't make that mistake. But is that who I am?
Am I where I live? the colour of my skin? who I know? how I feel? What I do? Who am I? Who are you?
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  • You are a poet too--don't forget! :) You are all those things, and more, I'm sure! Depends on how you look at things, I think. :) This one was most enjoyable, pacifier.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    You are what you know you are,
    not what others think you to be
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    when it comes to me
    you only see what you want to see
    and it's true
    I only show
    what I want known
    so...tell me
    do we ever know somebody?

    I decided a long time ago
    that what I think is not what I show
    so I am what I do
    just my thoughts don't make me true
    won't show you who I am
    (they'll just serve to scare you)

    We have many mask
    for every tasks
    you'll never know what my mum does about me
    and she'll never know some of the things I show you
    (don't tell her please)

    So I'm not the same person to you
    as I am to our friend
    and you not the same to me
    as you are to your family
    so who we are is many things
    never changing, ever changing
    with every person we meet




    And no one has answered my final question yet - who are you? :)
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    and I am afraid too
    to show you who I am

    So I'll just praise your poem instead.

    It was very true.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • beautiful...im saddened as i surf this place that ive found so much comfort in the past 19 months and even before then. i need to go to sleep but yet i feel i want to read every single thing just once more as i say goodbye
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    spendid
    Wonderfully shaped inner thoughts Mz Pacman
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    spendid
    Wonderfully shaped inner thoughts Mz Pacman

    Really? It's strange, I haven't written anything in a long time so the other day I sat down and wrote three poems here (including this one). And with all of them I felt I didn't do a very good job at all of saying what I wanted to say. Actually the only one I thought I'd said something in was the only one that wasn't responded to :)

    you're doing some really good work recently.
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    I really enjoyed this one Pacifier, it is very introspective and inviting. I am glad you shared it! :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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