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the one you dont see

the_chiefthe_chief Posts: 2
edited June 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i fly through your days just like a ghost
only those who believe in me can see me
to the rest i'm nothing, only a cool feeling
just like the breeze, i pass by invisibly like the breeze

i wish i could take shape in your eyes
i wish you would be one who believes in me
i wish to be more than just a breeze across your face
i wish i was a tornado, so i could wrap you up inside me

but i'm a ghost to you, why wont you just believe
you dont see me being in your life, you dont see me at all
but i'll still fill your lungs and keep you alive
thats all a little breeze like me can do... for you
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  • FelicityFelicity Posts: 339
    i know all about a boy who wants to be seen and believed.

    sometimes all the blind can do is feel that breeze upon the cheek to know that they are alive and that you are near.

    you want to be in somebody's life?then GO BE IN IT! NOW! DO NOT DELAY!

    lol!

    i'm smiling.
  • artin90artin90 Posts: 66
    your poem is true. people who dont know me dont see me they just see a form and look past. ive tested this every once in a while ill go right beside someone and say "hey" really loud and they dont look until i said 1 or 2 more times. its something weird
    “ ahh…. Yaa…. If you trust me at all… if you wanna listen to me at all… which you certainly don’t have to. Speaking from experience I can tell you that things change. You could believe me, you don’t have to. They probably won’t change, unless you make them. The best way to change something around you, something you don’t like, is.. to change yourself. I don’t think you want other people changing you.. I think.. I think.. the only person you want changing you… is yourself. So if you ain’t happy…. If you’re reading magazines about generation x’s and thinking ‘ya im one of them’ well fuck that…. Don’t let anybody tell you who you are. No… No…. No one can tell me who I am. I can tell you who I am but that would be a long story… I can tell you who I am and it wouldn’t fit in a Rolling Stone…. It wouldn’t fit in a video… it wouldn’t… its my life…. Its your life. Youre the only one that knows who you are. I hope you know who you are. If you don’t know who you are, figure it out. Cause you are some body. And Im probably stating the obvious. But I just thought I would do it anyway. So if you fell like you got a piece of duct tape on your mouth, if you feel like you cant speak. Take it off, Speak up. Speak your Mind. Shout it Out. Let ‘em Hear Ya. Shout it out…… YAAA YAAAAA yAAAAAAAAAAA.” Eddie Vedder (Porch ’96 Randle Island 2)

    10/22/03
    Ten, No Code, Vs., Yield, Riot Act, Vitalogy, Binaural

  • pearljoypearljoy Posts: 47
    I love it!
    PearlJoy!!!!
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Very nice. :)
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  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    *raises glass for you, myself, and all who have felt that same feeling in their gut*

    wonderful writing, beautiful beautiful work....

    so true.
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    Hats off to you.....nice work. I know this feeling all too well, thanks for sharing it.
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
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