Memories and music

pearljoy

Sweet in one moment but bitter on his lips
A sound pierces through his mind;
Left with a memory of a painful last kiss

Driving in the sunshine of today a song takes him to younger yesterdays
He loved her so, silent memory lingers on & forever in
present todays

A despondent love left him to feel lost and cold
A long walk alone carrying pain, like heavy stones

An echo calls him to a flashback he thinks back -
A song of our own chills my kindness, freezes my soul

I am a child again I’m pain at your hands,
you’ve stolen my innocence and I want it back……

Music you restore me during the dark, love me during light –
thank you for the sound of breath, thank you for saving a life.

FinsburyParkCarrots

Good transition from third to first person narration. And I always find as someone who tries this technique in writing too, that it's not always easy to achieve it without a little awkwardness. You succeed here without difficulty. Thank you. I enjoyed reading this.

pearljoy

thank you for noticing....i appreciate it...