Goodbye, loved one

TheATheA Posts: 17
Hi.

This one is called "Goodbye Loved One" and I wrote it for a friend who had a loss.

Hope you'll like it:


I walk to the hill, my air is cold
Raising my head to the stars, I behold
Where is my darling while I look?
Her departure to the next world my breath took
Is there a next world for her to be?
However, It doesn't help me
Rest in peace, we had our times
Just know that I loved you

Nothing will be the same, my dear
I still miss you and I feel only fear
Fear of a start, of losing the memory
But things pass, at least we had our harmony
And I gaze at the stars and try to find your face
A tear drops down on my cheeck running in haste
The time we've spent was one I won't forget
But my darling, Rest In Peace

Heaven is the place your train is going
Down on earth my tears are still flowing
The stars above are pretty and hollow
I hope you can hear my prayers of sorrow
My darling, be safe as you can be
I don't know if it's any use, I hope you can hear me
You left me here crying out my soul
I am not blaiming you my loved one, my whole
Thank you for the time, good luck if you can hear
Rest your soul, and if you're crying, wipe the tear
Have no fear


Cheers
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Comments

  • That's beautiful. I can relate in ways. Thank you for sharing :)
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