House of Cards

ripple effectripple effect Posts: 87
House of Cards

You built your house of cards too high
and now it starts to crumble
The life you live is one big lie
and now you start to stumble
You spread yourself too thin my friend
and now we see right trough
The time has come for you to end
and make a life thats true.

r.e.
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  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    this one deserves a comment, there's nothing worse than silence after a piece

    this is a good little piece
  • Originally posted by EvilToasterElf
    this one deserves a comment, there's nothing worse than silence after a piece

    this is a good little piece

    Thank you EviltoasterElf.

    I promise not to quit my day job. :D
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    i'd have to agree :D



    ...you...


    :D
    ~all is full of love~
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    The Jack fell from your house of cards
    and ran into the knight
    The black Ace had to grab a spade
    and dig the jack a six foot grave
    The king of hearts would here no case
    he'd bury him and then the Ace
    The jack strolled to the courtroom
    his face was rather flush
    he saw his seven children running straight
    to put the money on the plate
    though two pair of tens did guard the gate
    they somehow all got through

    what....where am I? Who are you people?
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    mad as a march hare

    or.. is that here..


    hear???


    :P
    ~all is full of love~
  • bump
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    happy day to you r.e.
    it's yours, you know
  • Originally posted by PastaNazi
    happy day to you r.e.
    it's yours, you know
    Thnak you pasta. It's been great too! The weather is a perfect 72 degrees and not a cloud in the sky.
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    the king of diamonds fell from grace
    his queen was past her prime
    the jacks and jokers grabbed the ace
    they knew it was their time

    the lowly deuce did gasp for air
    as did the clubs down low
    the king of hearts is now the heir
    to the kingdom's donkey show

    in shame the diamond queen did wed
    the king from the land of roses
    her tears they flow - the crown instead
    is blood red as the sad reposes
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • Originally posted by olderman
    the king of diamonds fell from grace
    his queen was past her prime
    the jacks and jokers grabbed the ace
    they knew it was their time

    the lowly deuce did gasp for air
    as did the clubs down low
    the king of hearts is now the heir
    to the kingdom's donkey show

    in shame the diamond queen did wed
    the king from the land of roses
    her tears they flow - the crown instead
    is blood red as the sad reposes
    olderman, you rule.
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    thanks ripple.. your poem inspired me .. honestly
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    the queen of magpies
    baked her cakes
    and knightly they were stolen

    the jack confessed
    because her tresses
    made his mitre swollen

    he brought them back
    and when they came
    the joker popped up fastly

    I hereby take the ace
    of hearts
    but yet the king, not lastly

    said with diamonds I did
    win you, woo you, with
    love I have construed you

    I'll put the 8 of spades
    outside your gate
    to show you

    that my love is forever love
    so bake your tarts and tender
    me your heart

    I know I shall begin
    to win when
    sinning knaves forsake you
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    lmao!!

    this card stuff could get out of contraband
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • Originally posted by olderman
    lmao!!

    this card stuff could get out of contraband
    King
    Queen
    Jack
    and Ace
    52 cards thrown in my face.

    Heart
    Diamond
    club
    and Spade
    What a fucken mess we made
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