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First Morning Light

ripple effectripple effect Posts: 87
edited June 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Darkness gives way
to first morning light
Revealing the beauty
covered by night

Cool fog disperse
bright sunlight breaks through
The meadows all sparkle
from orbwebs with dew

The worlds now awake
the sky vibrant blue
Warming the land
and the day that is new

r.e.
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    hung wet and dried like an icicle in summertime alaska
  • ripple effectripple effect Posts: 87
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    hung wet and dried like an icicle in summertime alaska
    You are the "Word Master". I can't compete.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    bagh... i'm a hack :)

    i never knew you did poetry... it's nice to see you post here :)
  • ripple effectripple effect Posts: 87
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    bagh... i'm a hack :)

    i never knew you did poetry... it's nice to see you post here :)
    Is it even poetry?

    It's a great outlet here. And of course great people also.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    it's a TERRIFIC outlet :)

    and yeah... i'd call it that, btw
    your education shines through
    it's nice to read :)
  • ripple effectripple effect Posts: 87
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    it's a TERRIFIC outlet :)

    and yeah... i'd call it that, btw
    your education shines through
    it's nice to read :)

    Really? my education? how so? :D
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    oh, i'd say, but i'd offend someone, i just know it :)

    just trust me on this
  • ripple effectripple effect Posts: 87
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    oh, i'd say, but i'd offend someone, i just know it :)

    just trust me on this
    Please tell me pastaNazi.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    let's just say your understanding of the english language is apparent


    :)
  • ripple effectripple effect Posts: 87
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    let's just say your understanding of the english language is apparent


    :)
    Are you kidding me? My writing skills suck. That's why in real life I hire professionals to do my copy writing.

    You're too kind. I guess that's why we've been friends all these years.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    we've been friends all these years because YOU started it by being TOO kind :)
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    OH... and shit!

    outsource that copywrite shit to me, LOL

    i'll write for you :)


    ummm and... how much's it pay?
  • bambi girlbambi girl Posts: 406
    wow, i could imagine the sky and all you wrote....beautiful....thank you for that glimpse of sunlight :)
  • FancyFacadeFancyFacade Posts: 330
    awesome poem, thanks for sharing
  • ripple effectripple effect Posts: 87
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    OH... and shit!

    outsource that copywrite shit to me, LOL

    i'll write for you :)


    ummm and... how much's it pay?
    $75 - $150 per hr.
    We should try something sometimes.
  • ripple effectripple effect Posts: 87
    Originally posted by bambi girl
    wow, i could imagine the sky and all you wrote....beautiful....thank you for that glimpse of sunlight :)
    Thank you Bambi Girl. As an Artist I've learned to appreciate the beauty around me.

    And you're welcome. If I can make one person's day then I'm truly happy.
  • ripple effectripple effect Posts: 87
    Originally posted by FancyFacade
    awesome poem, thanks for sharing
    Anytime and thank you.

    I've should have hung out here sooner.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Originally posted by ripple effect
    $75 - $150 per hr.
    We should try something sometimes.


    sure... let me know :)
  • ripple effectripple effect Posts: 87
    another bump for the fuck of it
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