Bucket Steak

Floyd ManzeraFloyd Manzera Posts: 82
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Cattle graze the hillside
The sun is gentle and kind
Here comes Lyle and a mechete
The cow lost its life.
Few months later
Mom's cooking food
On a plate next to carrots
This bucket steak tastes good.

*edit. mechete is actually spelled machete.
Vice President of the Synchronicity Club.
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  • Is that from an experience during your youth?
  • Is that from an experience during your youth?
    yes kevinbeetle.
    during the dire times of the early 1980's when i was about 7 years old, my family had a farm. i would sit on a hillside and watch all the animals frolic and graze. i fell in love with it, for you see there was no video games and "toys" to pass my time. but when Lyle stormed the hillside to slaughter animals for food, (the grocery store was not an option...we were poor) it stuck in my mind. that's when i decided right then and there that ending the lives of animals that are basically defenseless is the way to go.
    now it's too hard for me to follow in the footsteps of Lyle because of companies such as IBF have shut me out.
    i wish it was 1981 again.
    Vice President of the Synchronicity Club.
  • PM me. I'd like to talk to you about this.

  • *edit. mechete is actually spelled machete.

    why didn't you just change the spelling in the body of the piece? reminds me of that SNL thing...what were those called? daily thoughts?
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • why didn't you just change the spelling in the body of the piece? reminds me of that SNL thing...what were those called? daily thoughts?
    because i think flaws should stick out and be noted when they are made.
    i am not one to ever try to cover up mistakes, namely my life, which is of course the biggest one of all.
    Vice President of the Synchronicity Club.
  • fletchfletch Posts: 57
    because i think flaws should stick out and be noted when they are made.
    i am not one to ever try to cover up mistakes, namely my life, which is of course the biggest one of all.
    Floyd,
    A junkie would like to eat a bucket steak.
    You should not worry about how the cows feel, for they are stupid land mammals.
    And no, kevinbeetle is not a douchebag.
    Thank You.

    PS- I am synchronized.
    One of these days I'm gonna get organizized.

    You spend your life waiting for a moment that just don't come
    Well don't waste your time waiting
  • because i think flaws should stick out and be noted when they are made.
    i am not one to ever try to cover up mistakes, namely my life, which is of course the biggest one of all.

    i guess it's okay to let mistakes that can be fixed just wallow as they are...instead of correcting them...ugh
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • i guess it's okay to let mistakes that can be fixed just wallow as they are...instead of correcting them...ugh
    trappedinmyradio,
    you don't understand. if i were to edit my post and fix the discrepency, it will appear as though i changed the original meaning of my poem because the board insists of telling people that a post has been edited.
    hence, i footnote the disgrace and let it be, not to wallow as you would say, but as a reminder that i do in fact realize that my mistakes are acknowledged and understood.



    *edit. discrepency should be spelled discrepancy.
    Vice President of the Synchronicity Club.
  • trappedinmyradio,
    you don't understand. if i were to edit my post and fix the discrepency, it will appear as though i changed the original meaning of my poem because the board insists of telling people that a post has been edited.
    hence, i footnote the disgrace and let it be, not to wallow as you would say, but as a reminder that i do in fact realize that my mistakes are acknowledged and understood.

    but, it also allows you to state a reason for your edit..."because i misspelled machete" - sorry...just a pet peeve...i understand what you're doing - it just annoys me...that's all ;) no biggie.
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • but, it also allows you to state a reason for your edit..."because i misspelled machete" - sorry...just a pet peeve...i understand what you're doing - it just annoys me...that's all ;) no biggie.
    i'm glad you are okay with it.
    Vice President of the Synchronicity Club.
  • i'm glad you are okay with it.

    ....ugh....i wish the AET forum would open back up
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • fletchfletch Posts: 57
    ....ugh....i wish the AET forum would open back up
    You are not allowed to chat there either, and this is the forum to discuss poetic works, is it not?
    One of these days I'm gonna get organizized.

    You spend your life waiting for a moment that just don't come
    Well don't waste your time waiting
  • You are not allowed to chat there either, and this is the forum to discuss poetic works, is it not?

    what the fuck are you talking about...we were discussing it...but, ah, nevermind - you don't understand...
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • This is what is called poetic justice. I was inspired tonight to actually create a work of art based solely on feelings I've experieced from this work of art. I will post a link hopefully tomorrow evening.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    this is silly
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    what the fuck are you talking about...we were discussing it...but, ah, nevermind - you don't understand...
    Yeah...I like floyd's comments...but i feel that the defenseless cows shouldnt be slaughtered either.Theyre so beautiful.
    And this is my 2nd day without eating meat again.
    Sometimes I just feel so guilty.:(

    Nice work of art anyway...........:D
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • ISN wrote:
    this is silly
    It might be silly to you, but sometimes this is how I like to express myself.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    express your silliness then.......I'm all ears
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • ISN wrote:
    this is silly
    well well well...if it isn't the ISN--proprietor of good taste.

    you do realize that you have posted in my awesome thread and you among others who deem my art "silly" will perhaps have to answer to the powers that be.

    also this is a no response post, so don't do it.
    have a good day.
    Vice President of the Synchronicity Club.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    yeah, bring it on baby
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • ISN wrote:
    I'm sorry Floyd. I should be more respectful to you because you haven't really ever done anything to me. I sincerely apologize for showing no tact. I love your poem. I hate myself.

    it's okay ISN, no need for that man.
    just try...that's all we ask.
    Vice President of the Synchronicity Club.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I must I must increase my bust....who're you talking.....okay, thanks, bye
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • This has to be one of the most touching poems I have ever read.

    Thank You for this Floyd Manzera.
    I only wanted to be somebody. So fucking bad I came unglued.
    Here we are now face to face and I'm fucking you.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    ISN wrote:
    I must I must increase my bust....who're you talking.....okay, thanks, bye


    now THIS is silliness :)
    i like sillyness, too

    in fact, the funny part is that earlier today, I was walking around composing circa Yngwie Malmsteen type lyrics that went

    "And when all her ire was spent
    in it's place bloomed a lovely pair of knockers"



    now THAT's silly!

    peace
  • thank you to all who read my poem and for the great comments, except for ISN.
    she doesn't know anything about poetry.
    Vice President of the Synchronicity Club.
  • As I said Floyd I love it... I hope you don't mind I shared it with some friends of mine...
    Nobody sits like this rock sits. You rock, rock. The rock just sits and is. You show us how to just sit here and that's what we need.
  • As I said Floyd I love it... I hope you don't mind I shared it with some friends of mine...
    no it's entirely okay to use it.
    Vice President of the Synchronicity Club.
  • edeneden Posts: 407
    no it's entirely okay to use it.
    This poem by Floyd touches all my five senses.
  • edeneden Posts: 407
    it's okay ISN, no need for that man.
    just try...that's all we ask.

    Hhaha...she edited her post, thats funny when it happens. :)
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