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HailHailVitalogyHailHailVitalogy Posts: 5,205
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
ive been in a deep mysterious depressed mood the past week so i wrote these..well actually i had them written a few months ago but i re-wrote them

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i pretend to enjoy
but im sick of enjoying your life
i want to enjoy my life before i fall apart into pieces
so i wont end up like you

i will be a new being
i will become the heart and soul of love
love with hope
love with leisure
love that you will never be able to deny

i sit at the desk knowing what i will do today, what i do everyday
nothing new to seek and nothing to love
just set the fire into the trap of my life
how do i escape the prison i created
dont try, cant escape the bars of jail in my mind

i will be a new being
i will become the heart and soul of love
love with hope
love with leisure
love that you will never be able to deny

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searching the maze in my mind for a way out
many traps i have set out but niether can i find them
these curving walls lead to nowhere and darkness surrounds me while i go insane

when I lived in the real world there was no maze, just a white page ment to be drawn with my life
now im lost and i have no guide to help me
maybe this flame will suit me while i am here going insane
but how can i trust this flame to bring me to the place i want to be

if i had the power, this wind i feel shall become a hurricane and wipe out all these walls so i wont be dazed

all i can do is ask for guidance to leave this confusing place

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it's not possible for you to know me
while i change my life for the best
i dont even know myself while being in the trap
the trap of life
its a learning process but i wish i would have never had a lesson on it
all the emotions and feelings that i experienced that effected my health and loneliness

this wind from the waters shall blow me out of the trap the flame has caused
should i trust the wind?
last time i trusted anything i got backstabbed and suicide was the answer
2003: Uniondale, MSG x2 | 2004: Reading | 2005: Gorge, Vancouver, Philly | 2006: East Rutherford x2, Gorge x2, Camden 1, Hartford | 2008: MSG x2, VA Beach | 2009: Philly x3 | 2010: MSG x2, Bristow | 2011: Alpine Valley x2 | 2012: MIA Philly | 2013: Wrigley, Charlottesville, Brooklyn 2 | 2014: Milan, Amsterdam 1 | 2016: MSG x2, Fenway x2, Wrigley 2 | 2018: Rome, Krakow, Berlin, Wrigley 2 | 2021: Sea Hear Now | 2022: San Diego, LA x2, MSG, Camden, Nashville, St. Louis, Denver | 2023: St. Paul 1, Chicago x2, Fort Worth x2, Austin 2 | 2024: Las Vegas 1, Seattle x2, Indy, MSG x2, Philly x2, Baltimore, Ohana 2
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    You Seem To Write Well Under Pressure.....
    Hang In There It'll Look Up!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • HailHailVitalogyHailHailVitalogy Posts: 5,205
    that mean they are good? lol
    2003: Uniondale, MSG x2 | 2004: Reading | 2005: Gorge, Vancouver, Philly | 2006: East Rutherford x2, Gorge x2, Camden 1, Hartford | 2008: MSG x2, VA Beach | 2009: Philly x3 | 2010: MSG x2, Bristow | 2011: Alpine Valley x2 | 2012: MIA Philly | 2013: Wrigley, Charlottesville, Brooklyn 2 | 2014: Milan, Amsterdam 1 | 2016: MSG x2, Fenway x2, Wrigley 2 | 2018: Rome, Krakow, Berlin, Wrigley 2 | 2021: Sea Hear Now | 2022: San Diego, LA x2, MSG, Camden, Nashville, St. Louis, Denver | 2023: St. Paul 1, Chicago x2, Fort Worth x2, Austin 2 | 2024: Las Vegas 1, Seattle x2, Indy, MSG x2, Philly x2, Baltimore, Ohana 2
  • HailHailVitalogyHailHailVitalogy Posts: 5,205
    b-u-m-p----
    2003: Uniondale, MSG x2 | 2004: Reading | 2005: Gorge, Vancouver, Philly | 2006: East Rutherford x2, Gorge x2, Camden 1, Hartford | 2008: MSG x2, VA Beach | 2009: Philly x3 | 2010: MSG x2, Bristow | 2011: Alpine Valley x2 | 2012: MIA Philly | 2013: Wrigley, Charlottesville, Brooklyn 2 | 2014: Milan, Amsterdam 1 | 2016: MSG x2, Fenway x2, Wrigley 2 | 2018: Rome, Krakow, Berlin, Wrigley 2 | 2021: Sea Hear Now | 2022: San Diego, LA x2, MSG, Camden, Nashville, St. Louis, Denver | 2023: St. Paul 1, Chicago x2, Fort Worth x2, Austin 2 | 2024: Las Vegas 1, Seattle x2, Indy, MSG x2, Philly x2, Baltimore, Ohana 2
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