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absent senses

wayofthedrunkenpenwayofthedrunkenpen Posts: 27
edited July 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Have been waiting for the last couple of hours for friday night to finally descend. Instead of working, I decided to post this.


I'm here
Left open to the elements
waiting for the next wave to strike
The next gale to blow me away
Fearful of what may come
But desperate for your storm
Find me
Clinging to the precipice
Body shaking with the strain
Longing for the avalanche
That is you to engulf me.
Eyes open
Flesh bare to your presence
Naked to your radiance
Lying sweat covered and broken
terrified of being incinerated
by your brilliance
I'm here
waiting for you to consume me
Up here in my tree
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Comments

  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    Where I put my keys...
  • FelicityFelicity Posts: 339
    that was so incredibly gorgeous........................
    how true the fear,how exhilarating the expectation of the crush.

    i dearly love it.

    let us all be crushable and willing to smother someone special soon.

    don't be scared!

    don't wait!

    do it!

    blissfulness in thoughts.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    you gotta promise me you'll keep writing stuff.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • wayofthedrunkenpenwayofthedrunkenpen Posts: 27
    Thanks for the comments. Unfortunately, there's no girl-at the moment that makes me feel like this. Think I wrote it because I've realised that I'm ready to feel this way about someone again and hoping that she's around some corner waiting for me to bump into her. Which is very optimistic and very unlike my normal self.
    Up here in my tree
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