hello..
BooBoo
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big smiley hello to everyone - new one on the board..
and i really like the atmosphere of this place - feels good to be here
creeping on the beautiful earth
with a terrible weight on my waist
pressed to it but never uniting -
in the rainy circle that smells like soil
with hazy eyes searching for mysterious
signs growing under the shade of grasses-
finding seas, seeing stars,
but never dechipering anything - i'm
too close
and i really like the atmosphere of this place - feels good to be here
creeping on the beautiful earth
with a terrible weight on my waist
pressed to it but never uniting -
in the rainy circle that smells like soil
with hazy eyes searching for mysterious
signs growing under the shade of grasses-
finding seas, seeing stars,
but never dechipering anything - i'm
too close
but their heart turned cold and they dropt their wings - sappho
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nah... kidding...
(sorta, you'll see)
nice poem, really nice, in fact
overall its an outstanding poem but that ending really gives it something extra.
hope you'll share more.
but anyway.. im ALL grateful
but better soon than late.
is there anything still better?
?
(after all, they need to be able to light a little lamp in our little heads every now and then & finally make us realize we're really not that clever..