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LeaderOfMenLeaderOfMen Posts: 110
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Be politically charged
Keep aware of your sorroundings
Oppose public oppinion, I you don't agree
Stand up to the powers of oppression
Disorganize religion, or simply let it fade away
Its only misleading, to force beleaving
Speak your mind, share your ideas
Stop speaking of others, and they may stop speaking of you
Should teach ourselves
The dangers of too much television
Pass it on to the youth
Open for them a different door
Read a book, write a poem
Gain a little knowledge
Learn an instrument, create something beautiful
Art is life, life is art
Never stop learning
Fight for whats right
Point out whats wrong
Know that
Love is blinding
Hate is misguiding
War sucks
Peace is everlasting
I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I like the concept. Try some more interesting word choices...this sounds too much like barking orders. Be more linguistically inventive and this could be great.

    A better title would help as well.

    Just my opinions though. Don't mean to sound harsh.
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  • LeaderOfMenLeaderOfMen Posts: 110
    its me barking orders to me. My philosiphy on the way I want to live as of now.

    Some of the words are shitty, but thats whats in my vocabulary.

    Thanks for the thoughts, I appreciate it.
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    LeaderOfMen wrote:

    Some of the words are shitty, but thats whats in my vocabulary.

    Not shitty! Dude, I wasn't trying to make you feel bad. Just offering my thoughts...don't take it to heart...
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  • edeneden Posts: 407
    LeaderOfMen wrote:
    Be politically charged
    Keep aware of your sorroundings
    Oppose public oppinion, I you don't agree
    Stand up to the powers of oppression
    Disorganize religion, or simply let it fade away
    Its only misleading, to force beleaving
    Speak your mind, share your ideas
    Stop speaking of others, and they may stop speaking of you
    Should teach ourselves
    The dangers of too much television
    Pass it on to the youth
    Open for them a different door
    Read a book, write a poem
    Gain a little knowledge
    Learn an instrument, create something beautiful
    Art is life, life is art
    Never stop learning
    Fight for whats right
    Point out whats wrong
    Know that
    Love is blinding
    Hate is misguiding
    War sucks
    Peace is everlasting


    It inspired me to want to get my ass moving and do at least one of those things! :D
    The last four lines are beauty.
  • LeaderOfMenLeaderOfMen Posts: 110
    I hope you do get out and try at least one of those things. I hope I can do a few aswell. Everyone may not agree but my intentions are good.
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
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