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LeaderOfMenLeaderOfMen Posts: 110
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
In my room
I live my life
In my room
I sleep, time and time again
In my room
All my life.
I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    He will not slouch to Bethlehem next time,
    just to the kitchen, rinsing off a glass,
    to get himself another shot with lime.
    He'll let the day of Revelation pass.
    He will not save us from hell fire, yet
    he might well watch us on the Internet.
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    He will not slouch to Bethlehem next time,
    just to the kitchen, rinsing off a glass,
    to get himself another shot with lime.
    He'll let the day of Revelation pass.
    He will not save us from hell fire, yet
    he might well watch us on the Internet.

    Yeats would be proud.
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    grooveamatic wrote:
    Yeats would be proud.

    Yeats would not do automatic writin'
    in a world of internet backbitin'
    Yeats would not do seances an' ouija
    in a world of lusty webcam greed, ya
    Yeats would not be magicking a wish, ya,
    to fish for golden simples of the moon, no
    But Yeats would be a hacker on the phish, ya
    ebay-defauding some poor noob buffoon, yo
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    Yeats would not do seances an' ouija
    in a world of lusty webcam greed, ya

    This, of course, I disagree with. :)

    Your ability to write off-the-cuff stuff continually amazes me, Fins. Truly.

    And I do believe Yeats would be impressed. At least by Palimpsest.
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    I forgot about that. Anyway. Let's stop hijacking this thread. I liked ?. I thought I'd tell the guy, but he's probably in his room, asleep. (jk ;););))
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    True, tis a good poem. Kudos, LeaderOfMen!

    Now, it is time for me to sleep. Adios!
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