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LeaderOfMenLeaderOfMen Posts: 110
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Like a clock the does not tell the time
or bell that just will not ring
Like a game that you are not allowed to play
or a ball that will not roll
Like a tree you can not climb
or a fort where you can not hide
Like a song you know, but can not sing
or a guitar missing all but three strings
Like a life without love
none of these things make any sense
I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
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  • That was very sweet and made me smile. :) Thanks for sharing.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • My pleasure
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Like a song you know, but can not sing
    or a guitar missing all but three strings
    I love this line....
    Great!


    ali:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • its just terrible
    seeing a guitar getting excited and find only two or three stings

    but its great makin sound aight
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
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