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LeaderOfMenLeaderOfMen Posts: 110
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
step on that roach
swat that fly
get a big old rock
make that squirel die
run in the house
get your brothers slingshot
fire at that skunk
from point blank
Ask your dad
to take you fishing
catch a big fish
leave it do die in the sand
while your at it
get your dads gun
sneak up on a moose
kill it and its' young
I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
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  • sorry for the terrible attempt at sarcasim
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
  • sorry for the terrible attempt at sarcasim

    you could turn that into a great satire piece...
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • how so? .
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
  • how so? .

    it has all the elements of a longer satire piece - about how our society is consumed with death...but, right now, it's just bones -
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    I like this...cause no matter how hard i try not to eat meat....
    a burger with cheese always sneaks up on me.
    I wish I could just be an Indian gatherer.....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • ill work on it...


    ...who gathers together
    all of lifes pleasures
    the greener the better
    no mozza or chedder
    a long life ill live
    with so much to give...
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    I wish I could just be an Indian gatherer.....

    Do you think Indians are very easy to catch? ;)
    .........................................................................
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    how so? .

    Maybe put an introduction on it. Something innocent yet possibly ambiguous and then slowy make your point one creepy, dark line at a time so that the mood at the end is surprising compared to the beginning.
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • justam wrote:
    Maybe put an introduction on it. Something innocent yet possibly ambiguous and then slowy make your point one creepy, dark line at a time so that the mood at the end is surprising compared to the beginning.


    ill give it a try
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
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