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Sober (1 month)

LeaderOfMenLeaderOfMen Posts: 110
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
gone are the days of thinking
ill better this world by drinking

away with bottles filled with liqour
theyll just take me from here a whole lot quicker

nevermore will I fall a slave
no thanks, Ill dig my own grave
I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :) Hard though it may be, I'm glad you're keeping on the straight and narrow. This was short and to the point---I liked the rhymes. You take good care there, LeaderOfMen! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • LeaderOfMenLeaderOfMen Posts: 110
    thanks man
    appreciate it
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
  • cartoonnightmarecartoonnightmare Posts: 52
    congrats - glad it's going well for you
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    congratulations to you
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I've been there, man. It can be done. Keep up the hope--and remember--do it one day at a time. It sounds corny but that's what works.
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  • LeaderOfMenLeaderOfMen Posts: 110
    thanks for the support
    one day at a time, really does work, there is no easier goal then not drinking today.
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
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