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Sun, day

LeaderOfMenLeaderOfMen Posts: 110
edited June 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Sun come up and light my day
I havn't seen your light since the month of May
If you do I hope you'll stay
So I can see to find my way
In your brightness I will lay
Soaking up all your beautiful rays
I dont care what people say
You will come, and Ill be okay
But it's been so long since the month of May
I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    I like the cheerfulness of this one. :)
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  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    justam wrote:
    I like the cheerfulness of this one. :)
    It really is quite a change (not the bad kind , but I couldn't come up with a nicer word for variation just now) :D
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • Nothingman54Nothingman54 Posts: 2,251
    Beautiful. I perfer a rainy day or something, to cool things down, its hot.
    I'll be back
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    Love the flow of your poem. The words roll off your tongue
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • LeaderOfMenLeaderOfMen Posts: 110
    thank you, everyone.
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
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