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LeaderOfMen
LeaderOfMen Posts: 110
edited June 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
To the islands of the sky
thats where I hope to go when I die
no more rocky solid ground
or lots of water where I could drown

Floating slowly therw the air
so much space Ill gladly share
with the ones who want to be
up so high close to me

To the islands of the sky.
I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
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  • ThorneHope
    ThorneHope Posts: 40
    This was nice... kinda like my "Sandcastles"

    Would be nice to find a place....
    Just like home.....
    Only peaceful...
    Filled with sunshine and laughter....
    And warm beaches and blue skies....

    Would be nice to float through time and space...
    Would be cool to look at the stars...
    the galaxies....
    like fireworks that never end...
    Sounds like .....
    Heaven.....

    ~ThorneHope
  • LeaderOfMen
    LeaderOfMen Posts: 110
    very nice

    I really like the lines

    wouldnt it be nice to find a place just like home
    only peaceful.

    they do have similarities to them
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    excellent!!!
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    wow this one was a nice visual...reminded me of Spirit in the Sky -

    "When I die and they lay me to rest
    Gonna go to the place that's the best
    When I lay me down to die
    Goin' up to the spirit in the sky
    Goin' up to the spirit in the sky
    That's where I'm gonna go when I die
    When I die and they lay me to rest
    I'm gonna go to the place that's the best...etc."
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!

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