Excuse me if i do not speak.

Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
A piece containing poetry about eyes and eyeliner...hmmm...
Wrote 'on the quick' about 10 minutes ago, so please dont be too critical lol ;)


Excuse me if i do not speak,
But i'm happy staring in those eyes,
Those eyes... a pale sea of green,
Surrounded by the lilac skies.

With a flash of my eyelids,
I hold that stare so close to me inside.
And our emotions-laced with love and regret,
Pour out from us- no longer hide.

But i'm afraid to say the words I feel,
I'm afraid of how you'd react to me,
I'm afraid that you don't feel the same,
I guess i'm too afraid...

So until i'm sure my thoughts are shared,
I'll dream the dream i've dreamt for hours,
And wait until the cold rain pours,
And disguise my tears with Autumn showers.

But as the rain dances on your skin,
A tear gathers in your eye,
Mixing in those seas of green,
And buried in those lilac skies.

So excuse me if i do not speak,
But i'm happy staring in those eyes,
And even if we say no words,
I hope,
Just for one moment-
That you feel the same as you stare at me...



Thank you, compliments are as always welcome :)
Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
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Comments

  • that's very sweet, mr pj :)
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • Originally posted by violet ray
    that's very sweet, mr pj :)

    Why thank you Violet Ray :)
    Nice to hear from you again.
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
  • mm prettylicious :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • Originally posted by of_the_girl
    mm prettylicious :)

    Wooohhh! There's a new one. What a happy compliment to receive. I think im gonna put that on a T-shirt. Then on the back put- "as said by Of_the_girl." hehe :) Geez i'm a goon....
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
  • Originally posted by Mr Pyjama
    Wooohhh! There's a new one. What a happy compliment to receive. I think im gonna put that on a T-shirt. Then on the back put- "as said by Of_the_girl." hehe :) Geez i'm a goon....
    ahehe! that's funny. i'm gonna be a tee shirt!! w00t! :p
    tee heee
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • Originally posted by of_the_girl
    ahehe! that's funny. i'm gonna be a tee shirt!! w00t! :p
    tee heee

    "tee-heee" was that a clever little pun? (tee-shirt, ya see?) If so, what a clever little girl you are.:)

    Oh dear...i can see an 'Of_the_girl' clothing range approaching soon, hmmm, who knows, they may even put your name or face on people's panties, hehe :D
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
  • Originally posted by Mr Pyjama
    "tee-heee" was that a clever little pun? (tee-shirt, ya see?) If so, what a clever little girl you are.:)

    Oh dear...i can see an 'Of_the_girl' clothing range approaching soon, hmmm, who knows, they may even put your name or face on people's panties, hehe :D

    :eek: oh the laughing will not stop :p ahehehe
    whoa! i did make a pun! i didn't mean to though... aw snap!
    but i feel sorry for the person who buys Jessie undergarments! LOL
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • Originally posted by of_the_girl
    :eek: oh the laughing will not stop :p ahehehe
    whoa! i did make a pun! i didn't mean to though... aw snap!
    but i feel sorry for the person who buys Jessie undergarments! LOL

    Erm...yeah...god knows who would buy them...like how uncool would that be...? :( *quickly throws out recently purchased Jessie socks and panties* Ooopsie LOL :)
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
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