Silent last words...

Mr Pyjama

As we sat beneath dark blue,
I stared so deeply into you,
Below the comfort of the moon,
We said no words-no words would do,
But as we left together as two,
The moon smiled; as it to knew,
That we had wished upon the stars,
Before the night turned truly dark,
We'd meet again in a day not far,
As we found our way to each others heart,
The love we shared-the only scars,
We'd leave each other before we part...


Thank-you I just had to let out something.
(wrote about the Friday night, i thought this up on the way home on the bus and thought i'd just share it with you all)

violet ray

i hope your person finds this.

Mr Pyjama

Me too, but they wont...

Mr Pyjama

Last night i dreamt a dream,
Where I was pretty and you spoke to me,
And in that dream we spoke all of the words,
That we had never before dared whisper.
Courage is a friend that we both need.

If only i lived the world that's in my head,
Where I was pretty and you walked with me,
And in that world we would not need speak,
For i had screamed my thoughts, and heard them said back,
And this was no echo,for once i wasn't alone.

But when i woke up this morning,
I looked around and you had left,
No words were spoken and i fell back to sleep,
And as i slept, i dreamt a dream,
Where i was pretty and you'd left with me.

suede

very nice...and sad

Mr Pyjama

Thank you for commenting though!

I like to know that people feel something from my work, if they just look at it and don't comment i feel kinda down.

You're like the second person though, so thank you very much, maybe you'll start a trend...? lol