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I'm the smallest flower.

Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'm the smallest flower,
In a jungle of weeds,
I'm the purest drop of water,
In the largest of seas,
I'm the shooting star,
People forget to see,
But you make me smile,
Because you noticed me...

I woke up happy today,
Knowing i would see you...

Tomorrow I willl be sad...



Any comments are welcome,
Thanks.
Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
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  • FancyFacadeFancyFacade Posts: 330
    that's beautiful--thank you for sharing
  • Cree NationsCree Nations Posts: 2,247
    Very nice
    >>>>
    >
    ...a lover and a fighter.
    "I'm at least half a bum" Rocky Balboa

    http://www.videosift.com/video/Obamas-Message-To-American-Indians

    Edmonton, AB. September 5th, 2005
    Vancouver, BC. April 3rd, 2008
    Calgary,AB. August 8th, 2009
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    a perfect day to read a lovely poem.....good monring!!!!! :D
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • A HitchHiker PoetA HitchHiker Poet Posts: 129
    This poem made me think
    Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    Thank you FancyFacade, Cree Nations, ISN and a Hitchiker poet for,all reading and commenting on my poem!

    Your compliments make me smile!
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
  • A HitchHiker PoetA HitchHiker Poet Posts: 129
    Your welcome...keep your thoughts moving in this direction
    Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
  • Cree NationsCree Nations Posts: 2,247
    I think you should go to the library and get some of Jim Morrison's poetry under "James Dougla Morrison" You will like it
    >>>>
    >
    ...a lover and a fighter.
    "I'm at least half a bum" Rocky Balboa

    http://www.videosift.com/video/Obamas-Message-To-American-Indians

    Edmonton, AB. September 5th, 2005
    Vancouver, BC. April 3rd, 2008
    Calgary,AB. August 8th, 2009
  • A HitchHiker PoetA HitchHiker Poet Posts: 129
    I have all of Jim's poetry...What a thinker
    Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    Originally posted by Cree Nations
    I think you should go to the library and get some of Jim Morrison's poetry under "James Dougla Morrison" You will like it

    Thank you, If i can actually find the library in this crap town i live in, i shall get a copy of it. :-) I really need to start reading/purchasing more profesional poetry...
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Mr. Pyjama! Oh, I just loved it! And you know, at first I didn't like that you added "Tomorrow I willl be sad..." but when I read it again, I understood the feel of it better and found that it was indeed, very fitting. :) Thanks for sharing!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    Mr. Pyjama! Oh, I just loved it! And you know, at first I didn't like that you added "Tomorrow I willl be sad..." but when I read it again, I understood the feel of it better and found that it was indeed, very fitting. :) Thanks for sharing!

    Thank you!!!! Yeah i wasnt sure about putting the "I woke up...blah blah" bit, but i dacided to put it anyway, not necessarily as part of the poem, but because it was in the back of my mind at the time. My friend is leaving soon so i always have that in my head, as i will miss her greatly. This poem's just about how you can be happy together as two people, and just click, but then just realise how sad it can be to know that that person will be leaving soon.

    Anyway thanks for your compliment :-) xx
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
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