Shooting Star

Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
These are just some lyrics that i wrote for my band. They're not necessarily poetic, just simple.
Oh and it's not meant to rhyme throughout.

It's kinda about feeling the comfort of a good friend, but also knowing that the feelings that they have for you can sometimes go, and it's about grapping and remembering the special times that you had cos that person is leaving you soon, anyway here it is:

Shooting Star:

I feel sad and all alone,
You're the star i couldn't hold,
Shooting through and shooting slow,
I don't want to let you go.

I'll keep the memories in my head,
One for each day that was shared,
Iv'e got pictures drawn onto my arms,
Painted red, i'll hide the colours now that you've gone....

...away-ill hold you, you're the clothes that i wore,
This hand of love's been held before,
I'll grip it tight as we part i smile,
But tomorrow you won't turn...

...back.

I feel sad and all alone,
You're the star i couldn't hold,
With your light i will grow,
without the light...who knows?

I'll keep the memories in my head,
I'll count the days that we've got left,
I've got pictures drawn onto my arms,
They look less pretty now hat you've gone...

...away-i'll hold you, you're the clothes that i wore,
This hand of love's been held before,
I see your footsteps, i hear them walking fast,
But tomorrow they won't walk...

...back...


Thank you, please comment. :-)
Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
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Comments

  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    i like it
    =)
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    Originally posted by violet ray
    i like it
    =)

    Thanks
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    it makes me sad too
    but i really like it.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
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