Framed Remains

Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The framed remains of what once was,
A smile distorted behind shattered glass.
Let's rewind time, maybe just once,
Back to a time when i felt love stare back at me.

Holding your picture against my chest,
If the glass won't break my heart,
Then the photograph behind it will...
Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    teh guy I was in love with....the buoy....worked in a Korean frame shop in Texas.....I took out his photo the other day....after he wrote to me.....sometimes.....the photo can hurt more than teh broken glass.....that's why they call them snap shots
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    Yes, it's so sad, but so true...
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    i wish rewinding was possible.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    If only it was...

    I can remember the first time i met this person, and gettin to know them was so great, and then you get this feeling, of how amazing it is to get to know that person. Then life can come and just slap you in the face, and then you realise how stupid you were by not taking advantage of situations earlier, before it's too late. I feel plagued by bad luck at the moment, grr...it sucks.
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
  • Obi OnceObi Once Posts: 918
    i'd say bad timing not bad luck, sorry for being the optimist, but these things are to learn from.. i've done my share of moronic things and got a bit wiser from it.. dont hold on to the memories to much, look in urself why it happened and give it a place...

    if thats any help....

    hmm, maybe i should take all my advice n shove it..
    your light's reflected now
  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    Nah, you're advice is welcome Obi, its just thati find it hard to do that at the moment, i think in a few weeks i'll probably find it easier to take your advice in. Thank you. :)
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
  • Obi OnceObi Once Posts: 918
    yeah well if it's a 'fresh wound' it'll need time to heal.. get hammered, scream a song on the way home, whatever, all will be fine eventually

    did i mention i like ur piece already? :)
    "Let's rewind time, maybe just once,
    Back to a time when i felt love stare back at me. "
    awesome
    your light's reflected now
  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    Originally posted by Obi Once
    yeah well if it's a 'fresh wound' it'll need time to heal.. get hammered, scream a song on the way home, whatever, all will be fine eventually

    did i mention i like ur piece already? :)
    "Let's rewind time, maybe just once,
    Back to a time when i felt love stare back at me. "
    awesome

    Now there's some better advice- "get hammered and scream a song on the way home" :D, okay ive planned my scream along songs:
    Garden (Chorus part SO fun to scream) and
    Leash!!! (surely no explanation needed for this)

    Thanks for the compliment on my piece as well. My stuff's never been called awesome before! :)
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
  • Obi OnceObi Once Posts: 918
    Originally posted by Mr Pyjama
    Thanks for the compliment on my piece as well. My stuff's never been called awesome before! :)
    yea well its well written and shows a clear image of ur thoughts, and since i checked n saw u were build in '88 makes it even more impressive!
    :)
    ooh n on my drinking advice, take it easy, it aint no race
    your light's reflected now
  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    Originally posted by Obi Once
    yea well its well written and shows a clear image of ur thoughts, and since i checked n saw u were build in '88 makes it even more impressive!
    :)
    ooh n on my drinking advice, take it easy, it aint no race

    Thanks, :) Yeah you shouldn't be encouraging me to drink so much at my age lol...
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
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