Building Upon

CodeRiot

Take this steering wheel and help me out
I need your guidance to get me out
For all my mistakes and all of my greed
I wish I could just find out what I really need

I lost my voice
When I tried to call out
I'd take a bullet to the skull
if for once you'd hear me out
All my past mistakes
All my stupid sayings
Built up a reputation
Even I could not hold up to
Just gimme another chance
Just gimme another chance

Tear out the hole that interferes with myself
I'm sure it would do tons to help with my health
Your words were always there to guide me
I just never took the time to think about what they mean

So just hear me out
all my past mistakes
all my stupid sayings
built up a reputation
even I could fuck up...

violet ray

nice
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Ali

dont be so hard on yourself....

good poem!

CodeRiot

I'm not hard on myself... I'm just honest.

And thank you.

ISN

yeah, what's with all this psychobabble.....what did we do before we had phrases like.....'I think you need to challenge that', and 'don't put yourself down' everything's so positive, and that's great.....but sometimes people need to chastise themselves honestly, and if they can do it, without the psychobabble, then they themselves know best.....I'm sick of psychiatric nurses who look at life through a microscope of pseudopsychojargon and come up with oprah-junk phrases......everything's so pc.....whatever happened to honesty? (v. good peom).....