Love/Hate

CodeRiotCodeRiot Posts: 115
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I feel your fingers
pressed up along my spine
holding back the feelings
that once drove me mad

tearing me apart inside
shredding all that's good
i hope one day i realize
you feel the way i should

I feel your eyeballs
blazing into my own soul
cultivating emotions
that once drove me to tears

I feel you oppressing
all that you should relieve
the inner demons
are calling out for me

you're tearing me apart inside
destroying all that was good
and i hope to god one day you realize
i feel the same way you do

even if i never say so
I tried to be a better me
In the end I looked like the rest of them.
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  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    CodeRiot wrote:
    I feel your fingers
    pressed up along my spine
    holding back the feelings
    that once drove me mad

    tearing me apart inside
    shredding all that's good
    i hope one day i realize
    you feel the way i should

    I feel your eyeballs
    blazing into my own soul
    cultivating emotions
    that once drove me to tears

    I feel you oppressing
    all that you should relieve
    the inner demons
    are calling out for me

    you're tearing me apart inside
    destroying all that was good
    and i hope to god one day you realize
    i feel the same way you do

    even if i never say so

    awesome. honest to god, truth.

    wow
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    This is very good, intense, I especially like the ending.
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I hope you start to feel better soon. It's terrible when you feel torn up inside. :(
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • Great peice!! well expressed. Uber,,,,,,,,,if you will!
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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