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Dawn

CodeRiotCodeRiot Posts: 115
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
lost the will
so much time to kill
between then and now
her stomach and ground
I want to say
all the words in my head
but they're feathered away
and I have to lie about them instead

see the sun rise
see the earth shine
all the while I'm
biding my time
just buying some time
I tried to be a better me
In the end I looked like the rest of them.
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I really like the lines below.

    "see the sun rise
    see the earth shine
    all the while I'm
    biding my time
    just buying some time"
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Being patient. Sometimes it's hard, but you get used to it after a while. :)
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Whoops. That was meant to be a PM. I was inviting you to another board to post, too. :)
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    I can't remember. Did I ever invite you here?

    http://finsbury.conforums3.com/index.cgi

    It's probably had less posts in its whole time than STTA had in a week, but it's there. :)

    And you're welcome. :)

    Finsbury, is this invitation for me or CodeRiot? :)
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Well, both, I suppose. I sent a PM to you and I'm using the 1.5 release version of Firefox. My PM ended up in the middle of this thread! It's not Kat and Sea's fault! I had a couple of tabs open and bonkerness followed. :D
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    Well, both, I suppose. I sent a PM to you and I'm using the 1.5 release version of Firefox. My PM ended up in the middle of this thread! It's not Kat and Sea's fault! I had a couple of tabs open and bonkerness followed. :D

    "bonkerness"
    I like that! :D
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    CodeRiot wrote:
    lost the will
    so much time to kill
    between then and now
    her stomach and ground
    I want to say
    all the words in my head
    but they're feathered away
    and I have to lie about them instead

    see the sun rise
    see the earth shine
    all the while I'm
    biding my time
    just buying some time

    Luckily time passes, first it's a year, then it's a month, and then it's next week... :D

    Can you check your messages please? :)
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