Down the Road

CodeRiotCodeRiot Posts: 115
edited December 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
look down
down so low again
dreaming of futures
hoping for happy feelings
to flood your mind again

breakdown or asphyxia
I'll be your friend
you breakdown, i'll fix you up
I'll be your friend
if we lose sight of what we really want
I'll still be your friend
get the message through your head
I'm gonna be your friend

let down
down so low again
reaping the benefits
as you lose your consciousness
backstabbed to death again

fingers point
and souls become sore
from all the outside eyes
running scars along your pulse
I want you more than anyone else

breakdown or asphyxia
I'll be your friend
you breakdown, i'll fix you up
I'll be your friend
if we lose sight of what we really want
I'll still be your friend
get the message through your head
I'm gonna be your friend

I won't let you...
I tried to be a better me
In the end I looked like the rest of them.
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Comments

  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    has that Save You influence.. is good :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • This was very nice, CodeRiot! :) I really like the stanza that you repeated...."I'll be your friend...I'll fix you up", couldn't ask for a better friend than one who'll be there through thick and thin! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    This one is so good! :)
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  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    I like this one a lot too. Nice way to end this memorable year, thanks.
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