Cliche Little Poetic Thing

CodeRiotCodeRiot Posts: 115
edited December 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Words describing
exactly felt emotions
so very same-ish
yet uniquely ours
if you tell me mine
i'll tell you yours

Wallowing deeply
the end of which I cry
so very shameful
yet utterly proud
if you bring the water
I'll bring the crowds

Powered little words
wrapped up so neat
sounds kinda same-ish
yet uniquely smart
if your show me mine
I'll show you yours
I tried to be a better me
In the end I looked like the rest of them.
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I like this one! :)
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  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    CodeRiot wrote:
    Words describing
    exactly felt emotions
    so very same-ish
    yet uniquely ours
    if you tell me mine
    i'll tell you yours

    Wallowing deeply
    the end of which I cry
    so very shameful
    yet utterly proud
    if you bring the water
    I'll bring the crowds

    Powered little words
    wrapped up so neat
    sounds kinda same-ish
    yet uniquely smart
    if your show me mine
    I'll show you yours

    I got the water,
    Bring on the crowds..

    neat poem.. thanks
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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