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CodeRiotCodeRiot Posts: 115
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i gave it my all
I lost my breath
up there in plain view
I gave it all to you
and you smiled back

the wind eases now
and the sails don't push
in any particularly sunny direction
and I feel the storm
coming down the way
but your smile takes me away
so far away
where the sun never leaves
and the sand never stays quite the same

I'm giving it my all again
I'm losing all my breath
up here in plain view
I'm doing this all for you
so show me why I'm doing this again...
I tried to be a better me
In the end I looked like the rest of them.
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    :D:D:D:D

    At our best, people make efforts for Love
    to stay on an uphill path, it can be for the love of the climb
    or maybe for what we imagine is up on top?

    but day in and day out,
    it's a dreary climb without good company
    and to keep going,
    it helps to have a few (even two)
    united in their passion for the trip
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
    amazing imagery!!!
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
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