deep down

CodeRiotCodeRiot Posts: 115
edited April 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
friends
so long now
we finally pushed
and pulled each other
into a new abyss

lying
naked on the bed
with the first days lights
shining neatly across your forehead
I dream of you

it's tough
to please yourself
everynight
with no one else
to hold you up
when your knees give out
and your faithfulness
is all blown away
by the wind
out there
in the trees
on the moon
and the sea

so happy
you feel
the same way
I've felt for so long

do you feel it
deep down
in your throat?
the sense of joy
I've been holding in for so long
I tried to be a better me
In the end I looked like the rest of them.
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Comments

  • bossman3188bossman3188 Posts: 263
    i am impressed with this piece...very good
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I like the happiness in this one. :)
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