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sistanumsysistanumsy Posts: 218
edited June 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
that rock there
enormous as it be
once under ground
now for us to see
creep along, fingertips
tippy toed around
a'las grains of sand
every bit coarse
patting to perfection
disappeared by chance
regained by force
hidden again, stance
K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
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  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    sistanumsy wrote:
    that rock there
    enormous as it be
    once under ground
    now for us to see
    creep along, fingertips
    tippy toed around
    a'las grains of sand
    every bit coarse
    patting to perfection
    disappeared by chance
    regained by force
    hidden again, stance


    great imagery
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    Now this is really outstanding :o
    respect...
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • sistanumsysistanumsy Posts: 218
    Thank you.
    K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
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