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This is my start

sistanumsysistanumsy Posts: 218
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
across the fire a froward face...sadly, alone, displaced, looked away... went to the house, inside. Gone long it's disawry. This life can only last so long...

It wasn't the end of the world...today.
still have to do's and a life time to go

Mourning felt world wide, the need to be...tough regret, Suffer not the little, for they grow, what may be, learned. Snakes swim and a Mustang's song...

It wasn't the end of the war...today
keep on going , come what may

Any wasting left, what you will. Life can be short and money had. To have until you die... shy not away the real side unless you've shared it all...

It wasn't the end of the road... today
in on foot, honest total lie,

Getting lost, to know, that it is still out there. Awing eye's...so receptive. Teaching fundamentals that inspire. Love to do, into tomorrow...

It wasn't the end of the road in the war of the world... today.
K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
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  • Obi OnceObi Once Posts: 918
    brilliant chose of words! very well written!

    "shy not away the real side unless you've shared it all..."
    wow!
    your light's reflected now
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    I liked how you tied in the different phrases and always ended with "it wasn't the end of the world...today" ...keeps it really coherant. Kind of like a little bit of sanity in an insane world. Very nice.
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • sistanumsysistanumsy Posts: 218
    It's just me only sharing it. Thanks
    K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
  • wayofthedrunkenpenwayofthedrunkenpen Posts: 27
    Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this poem. Really imaginative and actually made me think(which is a miracle in itself)
    Up here in my tree
  • sistanumsysistanumsy Posts: 218
    Good morning!
    K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
  • PrettyNoosePrettyNoose Posts: 146
    wow, very nice indeed. that's tops it is.

    i can hear it sung really gently by a dulcet voice...
    her life was saved by Rock 'n' Roll
  • rafarafa Posts: 50
    COME OUT

    Come out and i live my life, come out
    i dont understand nothing so you won't understand me
    and see your world,
    world?... i do not exist
    come out and observe, come out
    and... you know what, i don't know nothing... i feel,
    come out and play, come out
    yes yes
    and face those who are controlling,
    no no no
    come out and
    begin the labor to
    create a new world that is constantly changing and one day won't
    be my world anymore,
    come out
    come out tell me what's all about, talk to me, dont talk to me... just be there for me, be there... so alone
    and cry, come out and die,
    come out and leave this world, come out
    and live the world,
    come out and live this life, come out... confused...

    ___________________________

    INSPIRATION:

    "went to the house, inside." from:

    This is my start (from sistanumsy)

    across the fire a froward face...sadly, alone, displaced, looked away... went to the house, inside. Gone long it's disawry. This life can only last so long...

    It wasn't the end of the world...today.
    still have to do's and a life time to go

    Mourning felt world wide, the need to be...tough regret, Suffer not the little, for they grow, what may be, learned. Snakes swim and a Mustang's song...

    It wasn't the end of the war...today
    keep on going , come what may

    Any wasting left, what you will. Life can be short and money had. To have until you die... shy not away the real side unless you've shared it all...

    It wasn't the end of the road... today
    in on foot, honest total lie,

    Getting lost, to know, that it is still out there. Awing eye's...so receptive. Teaching fundamentals that inspire. Love to do, into tomorrow...

    It wasn't the end of the road in the war of the world... today.
  • sistanumsysistanumsy Posts: 218
    I wrote here on my old but it wasn't showing I would like it to. To find the time to write and then to have to redo it. I will forward it to those who read my other. Ok well it shows tonight yeah. I hope I can contain the numerous threads of mine to one. A whole two.
    K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Excellent poem! I really like it alot. Very descriptive.
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I too enjoyed it.
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