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I need a write...

sistanumsysistanumsy Posts: 218
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
This bottle O' Booze Ja me son

The house is quiet...
the third, son, child

Besides

A house full of company
I cannot... not want it.

Handing a fiend anything.
What is being ask of me

Beside

Kindly hand me your key.
Whichever best works...


Candles burn, tis the last
time they will... Maybe


Be side

Why can't I hear you...
Playing in the garage


Silently, a pause...An
wonder of it all....









Hope this is all good.
K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    You know, as I read this, sistanumsy, I hear it in my head being read by somebody like, Peter Tosh. It just has that ratsa feel to it to me. There's this tune by this band, Big Sugar, it's called "Where I Stand" and there's this part where a member of their band does this little spoken word thing and that's totally what I was feeling as I read this so, yes, I like it! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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