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my first post

rumirumi Posts: 9
edited April 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
could you please be quiet
i'm trying to get some sleep
shut off all your loud machines and
go back to sleep with me

i would like a little
time alone to think deep thoughts
i would like a smile
one last before they
turn off all the lights
and all is quiet
remember what sevensins said............nothing inportain
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  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    anything by the quintessential rumi
    speaks volumes :D


    ..remembering to be calm...........

    great new post
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    Lovely. I think in that gentle movement in the distance there's the echo of trains passing each other under the mountain, toot-tooting a happy hello after a parting.

    :)
  • rumirumi Posts: 9
    thank you....this is just prt. 1..........it a song and as the music changes and builds i will write mor lyrics for each section.
    remember what sevensins said............nothing inportain
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