Dust Devil Pitch

buttersidownbuttersidown Posts: 7
I am the bride
on the funeral pyre
wailing and carrying
though I held the knife
that went into my dear dying
husband's blind eye.

And the townsmen all leer
at the tear in my sheer
at the gash in my cheek
i got being thrown in the slammer
when my face hit the padlock
that still swings on the hook.

Yes, I am the bride
binge-purging my love
for an ominous man
who comes like a ghost
to my bed everynight
and haunts my happiness
with laughing delight.

And in dreams my fist hits his face like a stop light ignored.
And he smiles, grabbing my ass, calling me petnames, making small
petty
dust devils pitch
fits that mean absolutely nothing
no how
to no one.

I can do naught but spin and spit.

(The rings on this carousel ride
are but hammer handles.)
I hold my hands wide
keeping centripital forces
from forcing me into tornado swirl.


And I CRY, oh my dear God how I cry.

It's supposed to be dead
so go on, love... die.
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Comments

  • "The tragedy of life is not death but growth."
    (Kamala Das, feminist, poet)

    Great poem here.
  • the tragedy of growth...

    who, praytell designed this shit?


    thanks finsburypark
  • So angry and sad and excellent!

    Hats off to you, buttersidown!

    And Fins, you are a tree of knowledge :), so glad you branch out and embrace us and feed us!



    "There was only the kitchen table where I would cut vegetables, and after all the plates and things were cleared, I would sit there and start typing" - Kamala Das

    :D That's kinda how I do it, but I use the pen instead of the typewriter. :) Wow! Kamala Das, what a woman!!! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Originally posted by Being Enlightened

    And Fins, you are a tree of knowledge :), so glad you branch out and embrace us and feed us!

    If it were not for beautiful lights such as you, B.E., I really wouldn't bother.

    :)
  • Also, in the Aristotelian model of poetics, the climax of a tragedy is not the death of the tragic hero but this character's moment of anagnorisis, or realisation of their previous hubris; they make a leap (too late) to personal growth in full awareness of the horror they have witnessed or perpetrated.

    http://maven.english.hawaii.edu/criticalink/aristotle/terms/anagnorisis.html
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    A very sad tale buttersidown....but you tell it very well. May the ominous man never haunt your dreams again.
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • i've a small nagging notion that he will make it his life's mission

    however


    i have smaller fish to fry

    thank you nailz, your wishes mean much to me
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