raining on this sunday

Arieltke

Primitive dimples on your face too high to tell if they came from scars or if you were born by gifts of lust to this tell me now if you gave in to all of this.

If it wasnt home warming you could you pick up and go and just let the sand run through and through. Waving things and cars through your hair like your fingertips.

Dont tell yourself to take it all in Dont tell yourself to let yourself in just block it off Block it off and tell it all to go away until just the other day when you saw her get back into her car. slamming doors and trucks like ciggerettes.

its just a wishing block. laid out in front of you like choices on this mission that we put ourselves on for admissions sake.

one rescue. the lights flicker on. with your rescue. you might wander on.
dont take this away. dont take this away.

ForeverAJammer

Arieltke wrote:

Primitive dimples on your face too high to tell if they came from scars or if you were born by gifts of lust to this tell me now if you gave in to all of this.

If it wasnt home warming you could you pick up and go and just let the sand run through and through. Waving things and cars through your hair like your fingertips.

Dont tell yourself to take it all in Dont tell yourself to let yourself in just block it off Block it off and tell it all to go away until just the other day when you saw her get back into her car. slamming doors and trucks like ciggerettes.

its just a wishing block. laid out in front of you like choices on this mission that we put ourselves on for admissions sake.

one rescue. the lights flicker on. with your rescue. you might wander on.
dont take this away. dont take this away.

i really liked this, hit me in a really cool way...

but just a word of advice, its kinda hard to read:P hehe i do this sometimes too, a little format would make it a whole lot easier to read

please keep writing , writing stuff that touches other people, is hard to do ..u have a gift:)