Forever is over (2004 mix)

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edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Forever is over (2004 mix)

Remember that night
When you promised forever?
You’d love me till the end of time
That your heart
would never die?
I felt so warm, so fine

We passed the days
holding hands
With long gazes into each other’s eyes
Embraces that kept us warm
On the coldest nights
Isn’t it scary how time flies

I woke up this morning
Like any other day
Sun shinning and birds singing
But I somehow missed
the alarm
I just didn’t hear it ringing

You asked if I noticed
How dark the clouds were
I didn’t see them, in love I was lost
“Forever is over.”
You whispered
And you were gone like warm frost

I called your name
But you still walked
Tears hitting the ground
Then I could see
The darkening sky
Hear the thundering sound

My mind panicked
My heart broke
Is this how it feels when forever is over?
I didn’t know what to expect
When time ended
But my heart has never been colder
Live the life you dream

"Cause I can't wait to figure out what's wrong with me
So I can say this is the way I use to be" -- John Mayer
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Comments

  • :(

    very nicely written.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • Originally posted by violet ray
    :(

    very nicely written.

    Thank you violet ray. It is a "rewrite" from a poem that was wriiten in 1989.
    Live the life you dream

    "Cause I can't wait to figure out what's wrong with me
    So I can say this is the way I use to be" -- John Mayer
  • I like this poem. Thanks. :)
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