slam thread
jboelhow
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OK, I've been reading some good stuff here lets see what we can do off the top of our heads. Create a slam poem, right now, no editing just get into the flow... here's my attempt
Lost
Lost between the pieces
of the puzzle you called us
I wondered when you would see
the picture of me
standing by the river
holding onto the letter
a letter you left in my locker
it said goodbye
but with a X and a O
and now I sit here
Lost
Lost between the pieces
of the puzzle you called us
OK, lets see what we can create...
Lost
Lost between the pieces
of the puzzle you called us
I wondered when you would see
the picture of me
standing by the river
holding onto the letter
a letter you left in my locker
it said goodbye
but with a X and a O
and now I sit here
Lost
Lost between the pieces
of the puzzle you called us
OK, lets see what we can create...
Live the life you dream
"Cause I can't wait to figure out what's wrong with me
So I can say this is the way I use to be" -- John Mayer
"Cause I can't wait to figure out what's wrong with me
So I can say this is the way I use to be" -- John Mayer
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sunken into my memories
bulding my own glassy wall
coz this world is just too small
to understand my needs
flowers get wilted
under the black old son
no dreams to build
and no hope to come
with the scream of an inscect
and the soul of a climbin plant
im just spendin my days
waitin 4 the turn of time
~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~
F.ZAPPA
"Cause I can't wait to figure out what's wrong with me
So I can say this is the way I use to be" -- John Mayer
puzzle piece
peace play
power plant
see?
this goes here
you can tell by the lines
and that
oh yes..
that
right there... (baby)
i am anxious to sigh
sigh
try
swim
mote
teal
eye
heal
fly
that goes there,
i never was fully aware,
of all the pain you didn't share.
life goes quick,
when you're not living it,
but, now i'm living it...
now you're living it...
three words can make you sink,
for all the times you'd think,
that this wasn't fair,
now my Heart goes there.
so, this goes here,
that goes there,
now i'm fully aware,
of all the time we never shared.
so, this goes here,
that goes there...
come here...
come over here...
you, come over here...
http://www.suedecrush.com
"Cause I can't wait to figure out what's wrong with me
So I can say this is the way I use to be" -- John Mayer
Hear the needles weep intervention
claw at the likeness of spiders on the wall
claw at the pavement in hopes that you fall
free your mind
feel the ice
take the punches
roll the dice
hope for wealth and pray for life
sigh out regret and raise the knife
slaughter the demons
its only fair
slaughter the cretin
if you dare
your mirror is your only savior
your mirror copies your behavior
so take a look and step one back
see your life and what it lacks...
um... that ok?
And led me round the rooms
Naked and cold and grinning
Until everything went black
And I came down spinning
I awoke so drunk and full of rage
That I could hardly speak
A fag in a whale bone corset
Draping his dick across my cheek
And its into the shame
and watch you bleed
I want to tear off your limbs
and hear you scream
just so you'd know
what your love has done to me
I want to bleed you dry
and watch you squeel
I want to knock you down
so you won't hear
all the horrible things I'd do to you
all the morbid things I think of you
and make you feel all the things I feel
cause when you left me
and my broken heart was on the floor
so open for all to see
you hurt me hard
and I just want you to feel
what I felt
when you left me...
Sperm, It's in you to give.
I used to have something to say... now I'm just a caricature of who I was... it's sad, that the one piece of me I wanted for you, is nothing but a misrepresentation of everything I am.
"Cause I can't wait to figure out what's wrong with me
So I can say this is the way I use to be" -- John Mayer
and this one! I missed this.... well fukrn said
funker had a way... explicit expressiions of natural anger.. come back funker and stir it up
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
but he don't know it
his feet show it
they're longfellows
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got slam-ed
the audience
boo-d the judges
The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
my sentiments, exactly