Nothing here

jboelhow

A table
A chair
One strand of dark brown hair

Silence
Yeah, the kind that makes your head spin
Yeah, the kind that breaks even steel hearts

I saw that
Don't try to deny it
You know you can't excuse it

There is
Nothing here

pacifier

So few words but such a good description that I can imagine the whole situation

sistanumsy

If one would be so real always.

jboelhow

Thanks for the reading, sistanumsy and pacifier. The poem is an attempt to not get bogged down in words, instead create emotion with limited word choice.

pacifier

jboelhow wrote:

Thanks for the reading, sistanumsy and pacifier. The poem is an attempt to not get bogged down in words, instead create emotion with limited word choice.

well you certainly did that. well done.

Being Enlightened

jboelhow wrote:

Thanks for the reading, sistanumsy and pacifier. The poem is an attempt to not get bogged down in words, instead create emotion with limited word choice.

You did an excellent job in achieving what you set out to do. It would be too cluttered if you used more words. I admire that you're able to say so much by saying very little.