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The White Horse

hosh1314hosh1314 Posts: 63
edited April 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Self-worth reflects the soul
Healthy spirits spend time alone
Cheery voices calm the storm
Creating waves to send you home
The sky goes grey
Because blue no longer soothes
Chasing the white horse
All the way to the moon
Only to learn
A glimpse of the truth
That could have saved you some time
If only you’d known
That it was chasing you to
The white horse has now led to your doom
Don’t be ashamed
It’s got me to
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  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    a layne staley fan?

    sounds a bit of an addiction?

    couldn't say but reaching out without reaching in is a dangerous thing. I hope the rope holds.

    luck to you and keep writing.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • hosh1314hosh1314 Posts: 63
    thnx for the feedback.. how'd u know i was a layne staley fan?
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    appears in your writing... he's the only other person I can think of that has written about the white horse that's gotten him....


    there you have it hosh..

    be well.

    and you are more than welcome. tell me when you write more.

    seta
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • hosh1314hosh1314 Posts: 63
    its wierd.. as i read it again.. it is about layne staley.. i never realized that lol.. strange
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