Safe In Suffering

hosh1314hosh1314 Posts: 63
edited March 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Searching
Hoping to someday find
That which will set me free
Within my being, pain
Holding me down as I try to rise from this hole
But I won't, for without pain
I am empty
The images won't let me be
Why?
I prayed in vain, for my God turns away
Laughing at my every failed attempt to escape
My joy has gone
My world only exists in my mind
For I am numb to all that is around me
I have nothing but bitterness towards all that care
For without them I could leave
End this miserable life
Are they never pacified?
What must I do for acceptance?
I am wrong in all that I do, in all that I say, and in all that I am
I am tired, my will is gone
I am so very lost
I will remain inside of my hole
It is my shelter
For now I am only safe in suffering
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Comments

  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    oh prolific young poet
    so deep in the whole
    created in vacuum
    substantiated circumstance
    led to inject
    bliss
    rather than seeing bliss
    as deep and as natural as
    a spring rain fed rock quarry
    from which you can jump from the highest precipice
    leaving the works behind
    screaming adrenalin for a relatively short time
    until you hit life's pool
    ~all is full of love~
  • hosh1314hosh1314 Posts: 63
    i normally dont respond to feedback.. but wtf does that mean?? im confused
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    i sent you a pm...
    i'm sorry if i come off strong
    little bad habit of mine
    ~all is full of love~
  • hosh1314hosh1314 Posts: 63
    it wasnt that you came off strong.. i didnt know what it meant lol
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