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Lonely Man

hosh1314hosh1314 Posts: 63
edited May 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The lonely man
Can only wander
Feelings of shame
Are underrated
Travel the park
Hear the birds singing
Knowing only one song
Is starting to pain him
A shaky hand
Leaves him embarrassed
Rolling pennies
For one more measure
Slaying dragons
In his dreams
The lonely man
Just wants to be seen
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  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    all of the poems in this batch seem to revolve around the same topic - the person beneath the surface, demons... fears....
    in some of the poems posted, there is something stark about your words, something almost violent, but not visibly violent, just beneath the surface
    I can relate to some extent
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    rolling pennies for one more measure... the fist pack?

    all people wish to be seen.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
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