something political

hosh1314hosh1314 Posts: 63
edited December 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
normally i dont write like this.. but i was feeling something strongly and here it is.. please leave you thoughts/interpretations!

Battles inside are waging
But there's no need for this
Leave it to our president to declare war again
Maybe he'll find another victim
Right now he's a bird without a prey
And that innocent carcass in the nest
Is getting older day by day
Now it seems he's already found something
A dove building a fence around it's nest
But no nest is allowed fences
And the dove refuses to take it down
So our president wipes it out and takes a bow
He thinks that he's accomplished something
He thinks he should be proud
Not knowing that this dove built that fence
To try to keep the president out
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Yea for the anti-war statement..I've been looking for something inspirational:)
    Too many soldiers are dying....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    The dove of peace
    is present
    at the feast....
    Let the white flag unfurl
    The guns be hurled...
    And there be a peaceful resolution
    And an eventful solution...
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Ali wrote:
    The dove of peace
    is present
    at the feast....
    Let the white flag unfurl
    The guns be hurled...
    And there be a peaceful resolution
    And an eventful solution...

    now this is cool...very effective. kudos.
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