Untitled..need some suggestions..
blackoceans929
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hey I wrote this the other day and have no idea what to call it..any ideas?
unnoticed, she walks through the crowd
the flock past her
as she weeps with her head down
she once tried so hard to keep up with them
how she struggled
she can't do it again
she can't fake a smile
when all she wants to do is cry
she can't climb that other mile
and no one knows why
no one stopped to hold her tight
to tell her she was perfect
and make it right
through all the people
everything is such a blur
she can't find someone else alone
just like her
she grows restless searching
she can't do it on her own
oh how her heart is hurting
she needs to find her place in his arms
she dreams of a day
where someone will hold her hand
but not today
she doesn't understand
how can she be true to herself when that's not what they desire?
unnoticed, she walks through the crowd
the flock past her
as she weeps with her head down
she once tried so hard to keep up with them
how she struggled
she can't do it again
she can't fake a smile
when all she wants to do is cry
she can't climb that other mile
and no one knows why
no one stopped to hold her tight
to tell her she was perfect
and make it right
through all the people
everything is such a blur
she can't find someone else alone
just like her
she grows restless searching
she can't do it on her own
oh how her heart is hurting
she needs to find her place in his arms
she dreams of a day
where someone will hold her hand
but not today
she doesn't understand
how can she be true to herself when that's not what they desire?
some words when spoken...can't be taken back
she lived like a murder...but she died. just like suicide...
"if you love someone, set them free. if someone loves you, don't fuck up."
she lived like a murder...but she died. just like suicide...
"if you love someone, set them free. if someone loves you, don't fuck up."
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unnoticed, she walks through the crowd
they flock past her
as she weeps with her head down
she once tried so hard to keep up with them
how she struggled
she can't do it again
she can't fake a smile
when all she wants to do is cry
she can't climb that other mile
and no one knows why
no one stopped to hold her tight
to tell her she was perfect
and make it right
through all the people
everything is such a blur
she can't find someone else alone
someone just like her
she grows restless searching
she can't do it on her own
oh how her heart is hurting
her pain unknown
she dreams of a day
where someone will hold her hand
but not today
and she doesn't understand
how can she be true to herself when that's not what they desire?
she lived like a murder...but she died. just like suicide...
"if you love someone, set them free. if someone loves you, don't fuck up."
"She fell funny"
"Klaus Daimler, 40, engineer, calm, collected, German"
miscomprehension
~You laugh because I am different, I laugh because you are all the fucking same -?~
~Education is the most powerfull weapon you can use to change the world - Nelson Mandela~
she lived like a murder...but she died. just like suicide...
"if you love someone, set them free. if someone loves you, don't fuck up."
The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird