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I Didn't Know You At All

jakobmartyrjakobmartyr Posts: 5
edited March 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Hiway lit by candle flame
Tiny men, one in the same
Jakob tell me it's all been a game
I've been driving to long

Catacomb souls need masters to breathe
So exit the entrance or bowel to your knees
But if you leave you know it is treason
You don't have the balls

Did I ever know you at all?

You said you can't die alone
auspitious suspitions but none of my own
all this time I thought I had grown
But disease wouldn't let me

If you said you'd stay till the end
Would I lose my one only friend
Jakob tell me you're only pretending
I can't face that fall

Did I ever know you at all?

All and all the thoughts I've concieved
In the end, capsized my beliefs
My morals are gallos, actions, hanging theives
I'm a fly on the wall

Did I ever know you at all?
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  • xmascleanlovexmascleanlove Posts: 55
    your only scratching the surface with this...you should write more stanza's for this one...i like what's here but i think because you take a riddle-like approach you're only scratching the surface of the reader
    if you're a pot smoker and you don't own a ukulele you're fuckin up...but then once you get a ukulele you might end up moving to a guitar because its a gateway instrument you know
    ~ EV 6/25/03
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