Ah some of my poetry

Heatherj43Heatherj43 Posts: 1,254
(comments and welcomed)

THE LAST SHEET OF PAPER

The last sheet of paper,
in a little journal book,
sits anticipating,
for its own special verse.
All of the other pages
have words that play on them.
This last sheet of paper
waits to be the final gem.
She thinks she's last on purpose
to be a work of art.
She sits stark and naked
awaiting for that part.
At last the writer gets to her
and stares down at her face,
with gentleness and kindness
the pen gets put in place.
Yet the words spill out so slowly,
and many get crossed out,
the page feels disappointed
and she begins to pout.
She sings to the writer
in a mournful way...
of how she's waited all this time
for words on her to play.
But this writer has used up
all his words and energy,
and the pen and the paper
have now become enemies.
No longer stark and naked.
No longer white and crisp.
The writer pulls the page out
and tosses her away.



BEHIND THE SCARS
You wanted me to witness
who you really are.
You wanted me to validate
the you behind the scars.

You told your darkest secrets.
You cried the saddest tears.
You begged for me to listen
about the pain of all those years.

I saw the child within you.
I felt your innocent heart.
I heard you try to tell me
just to love you from the start.
(Dedicated to all of those who have suffered from abuse)


MELTDOWN

Meltdown occurring,
deep in my soul,
beliefs are all shattered,
no truths to behold.
My body's in tremors.
My mind in despair.
My heart is broken
and I'm suddenly aware...

that nobody cares
about you or me.
Nobody cares,
they turn their heads to not see.
They tell themselves stories
to make it all right,
while I crumble beneath them,
unable to fight.

They carry the guilt
beneath a gentle face.
Deep down they know
this was caused by their haste.
Now their lives will go on,
as if nothing was done,
but deep in their nightmares
I hold the gun.
Save room for dessert!
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Comments

  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    They are all glorious!!!!! :) I have a soft spot for rhyming poetry but it tickles me down to my toes when it is done with such fluidity.

    my favorite – by just this much – is ‘the last piece of paper’. If you don’t mind I think I’d like to print that out and keep it around.
  • Heatherj43Heatherj43 Posts: 1,254
    Thanks...I have a bad habit of writing in ryhme. I have tried to change my style, but to no avail. I appreciate that you like "The Last Sheet Of Paper" as the best of these three. I had a mild stroke one year ago yesterday and had lots of trouble speaking, walking and memory for about 6 months. Being creative waited even longer. "The Last Sheet Of Paper" was the first piece I wrote (that I liked) since the stroke. Thanks again for appreciating it! Oh yeah, you are more than welcome to print it. I would be honored to know someone has my work lying around. I have a poetry site, so I hope others have my work around, but when they sign my guest book they never tell me they printed any of it. A local band here in the Detroit area and I are rearranging some of my work to use as lyrics for up and coming songs. That has been a blast!
    Save room for dessert!
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    i'd love to visit your poetry site, that is if you don't mind of course. :)

    i'm just overwhelmed by your story. something must be said for the creative spirit. my great uncle was an artist all his life. maybe he wasn't an artist you'll find hanging in the Met but imho, he could have been. in his later life he too had a stroke. lost the use of the entire right side of his body, he could barely speak let alone lift a pencil or brush. but the creative in him was aching to be free and he taught himself to draw and sketch with his left hand. people familiar with his work, perhaps made note of a difference in his post-stroke drawings. the quality admittedly wasn't the same - but it was no less magnificent and the artist in him wasn't diminished a bit as far as i could see. art was his life, his joy, his reason for being besides love of course...and he delighted in sharing that with others. he'd get a kick out of us kids drawing but i, being artistically challenged by nature, discovered my own little bit of creative thanks in no small part to him. i was never proud of shabby drawings i gave him, so instead i learned to painted him portraits with words.

    may all the love and joy and beauty you share with the world come back to you. and i hope, rather selfishly, that we'll see more of it here. ;)
  • Heatherj43Heatherj43 Posts: 1,254
    Wow...I don't know what to say. Your response left me in tears. I know your kind words and your Uncle's inspiration will stay with me for a very long time!
    My poetry site is:
    http://www.geocities.com/heatherj43/index.html

    I don't post all my work on there though. Some of the ones that will be used for lyrics have to be kept private.
    Take Care...Peace...Heather
    Save room for dessert!
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    guess where i'm going ;)

    thanks so much heather, i always know that my smile is hiding in the poetry hut and today i found it in your thread.
  • kimsukimsu Posts: 6
    In keeping with the rhyming theme (well sort of):

    A plane ride
    A brain ride
    It's a long walk for you
    I've forgiven no one on this journey
    Except for my wallet
    Which has taken its time
    Through weather beaten grime
    I keep tromping down the same street
    Cobblestoned, windy, sludged
    Stained sidewalks that smell of
    Dead worms and glue
    Beer, coffee, and more wine,
    More wine and Monday blues
    School is out and people are gone
    Except for you, me, and the t.v.
    Same faces, same conversations,
    Different couch, different homes
    All in Cambride on a cold,
    Wintery Thanksgiving holiday
  • kimsukimsu Posts: 6
    Sometimes I can feel it in my gut
    That I'm going to talk to you and
    Say all of the right things
    And kiss you like they do in the movies
    But most of the time, I just imagine
    You in scenes 2, 3, and 4
    Walking through my door, staring at me,
    Taking my hand, and just holding me closely
    Like they do in the movies
    It's so easy to fall in love
    When you can change the channel or
    Push stop and freeze that moment
    Until the next movie with
    You and me in scenes 1, 2, and 3
    But you never enter and
    I'm left sitting in front of the TV
    Pressing on and on
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by kimsu
    Sometimes I can feel it in my gut
    That I'm going to talk to you and
    Say all of the right things
    And kiss you like they do in the movies
    But most of the time, I just imagine
    You in scenes 2, 3, and 4
    Walking through my door, staring at me,
    Taking my hand, and just holding me closely
    Like they do in the movies
    It's so easy to fall in love
    When you can change the channel or
    Push stop and freeze that moment
    Until the next movie with
    You and me in scenes 1, 2, and 3
    But you never enter and
    I'm left sitting in front of the TV
    Pressing on and on

    i like this one especially. maybe you'll post some more? :)
  • kimsukimsu Posts: 6
    Originally posted by coleen
    i like this one especially. maybe you'll post some more? :)
    Thanks Coleen, I'll definitely try to.
  • kimsukimsu Posts: 6
    I realize that you and me are the same
    Disappointed with life and love and what we’ve become
    Of course life has never been easy for either of us
    We never asked to be born this way,
    We just were and we’ve made the best of it
    Even if it’s going down that road to nowhere
    And passing by everyone that went somewhere,
    But our hearts are as big as our disappointments,
    And that has made us someone
    So everyone will remember you and me
    Even if we didn’t make it in the top three
    So what’s there to be unhappy about?
    If you or me left today, would you be ready or
    Would you feel the way that I feel because
    It’s not quite over yet, well
    At least not for me,
    And it's not because of you
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    "meltdown"
    took my breath away!
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    meltdown is a very gentle look at why things like Columbine take place.

    I knew Eric Harris and Dylan Klebold as my brother's best friends. If someone had just taken the time to listen, to tolerate, to understand, to motivate, to allow...

    perhaps it wouldn't've happened.

    but then, I believe that the u.s.a. needed a wake up call. Our children are lost and their cries for help will grow ever louder, as we continue to ignore them. Sooner or later, their cries will be shared the world over.

    gentle faces hiding the guilt aren't so gentle anymore, and they no longer hide nor feel the guilt in many places and among many times.

    good work.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • Daughter3Daughter3 Posts: 15
    Your poems are great!
    I try but I just can't get what I want to say and mean into Poetry.

    Brenda
    He still stands
    And he still gives his love, he just gives it away
    The love he receives is the love that is saved
    And sometimes is seen a strange spot in the sky
    A human being that was given to fly

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  • Heatherj43Heatherj43 Posts: 1,254
    Originally posted by Daughter3
    Your poems are great!
    I try but I just can't get what I want to say and mean into Poetry.

    Brenda
    Thanks. Thanks to those who liked "Meltdown" also. It has special meaning to me! Daughter...I'll tell you a secret, I can't write either! For every piece I do let others see, there are at least 20 or so pieces I attempted and couldn't get the words right. Then when I do get an idea going in the correct direction, I have to re-write it about 10 ten times or so. I throw away so much stuff! Then to top it off, the pieces that I finally think are okay to show others seem so simplistic and some people think are lame anyways! My grammar is so poor and I can't use punctuations correct. BUT...I write anyways! If you really want to express yourself through writing...just do it! I have found so much joy in it. I also find answers.
    Save room for dessert!
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