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oceans apart

stewardessstewardess Posts: 6
edited May 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
it's oceans apart from the days I've known it's deep in my soul taring the sky time falls out and the world is seaping weeping in to out I feel like the world is a tennis ball about to be launched how far into oneself turning inside out it has to effect every ounce of your being for realization...sweet considerations and the calming of oneself and the truth of tears drowning thoughts of a world
peace & love
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  • stewardessstewardess Posts: 6
    time falls into a grain of sand dropped into the ocean and pulled onto the shore to be stepped upon by countless numbers life calls and falls with each thought mind wraps and turns with contemplation realization consideration and the moon falls and fills the sky with reflective rays be the sun.
    peace & love
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    Beautiful, stewardess.

    :)
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    Very nice stewardess...I like the imagery you used in this poem. Ah..the ocean...to be touched by the ocean once again.
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
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