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her strength weakens me

and the winner is...and the winner is... Posts: 9
edited March 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
don't go i said
don't cry she replied
take my hand she offered
hold my heart i begged
show her mercy i asked
be brave she whispered
i wont forget you i promised
i wont forsake you she assured

and then she was gone.
we find out who we are when we find out who we love
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  • stewardessstewardess Posts: 6
    I won't forget you - hold my heart

    some powerful lines you have in this one...
    peace & love
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    god I can relate to this in events that just happened tonite
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    so much emotion in just a few lines.

    brilliant. beautiful. thank you.
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